CRITIQUE 1
Updated Architecture Portfolio
PRESENTATION BOARD
Schematic Design Stage
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CRITIQUE COMMENTS
Strategies diagrams not effectively communicate building massing intention.
Schematic plans are technical and preliminary, it does not produce meaningful third places where human interaction occurs.
To further develop different types of AR gaming environment proposal in public square and present it in story telling format.
Explore how the proposal adapt to the dynamic future of E sports gaming environment and technologies.
Ar. Kalsom Mohd
Proposal are good and proceed to further develop floor plans to full up vacant spaces.
Introduce more public places like cafe, pocket square and visually linked spaces that creates unique experiences.
Introduce mixed program inside a building to foster user's interaction.
Dr. Nor Hayati Mohd
ARGUMENTS
Respond to Comments
Schematic design of floor plans are still in development and focus mainly put on solving the technicality of the arena building design.
Further development of floor plan design will focus on more on designing intimate and relatable social spaces that foster meaningful human interaction.
Design Lack Human Touch
Will explore the option to make esports arena more flexible to suit different event scale.
